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Offline Admira

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Inima
« on: Friday 13 May 2005, 00:20:36 »
Inima din palma ta
S-a zbatut amu de-o clipa;
Si-a luat somnul dimineata
Se mai zbate si-o aripa.

Dupa multe rasuflari,
Chinul greu a si trecut.
Vor urma doar demolari,
Luturi moarte,fum sau scrum.
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Offline andreis

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Re: Inima
« Reply #1 on: Friday 13 May 2005, 12:48:27 »
iesea rima pe final si poate suna si mai interesant, daca ultimul vers era:
fumuri moarte, scrum sau lut

mesajul asta e un semn de apreciere
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Re: Inima
« Reply #2 on: Friday 13 May 2005, 19:17:43 »
Pai da fumul e mort din  principiu si la lut ma gandeam un pic mai altfel..dar buna si ideea ta!sa creem!! ;D ;)
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Re: Inima
« Reply #3 on: Saturday 14 May 2005, 16:02:06 »
Quote from: Admira on Friday 13 May 2005, 19:17:43
Pai da fumul e mort din  principiu si la lut ma gandeam un pic mai altfel..dar buna si ideea ta!sa creem!! ;D ;)

de ce adica fumul sa fie mort, din principiu ?
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