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sybillin

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« Reply #20 on: Tuesday 16 January 2007, 23:21:26 »
ai plecat,
frumusetea mea virtuala
despartire magistrala
pe o aurora de cuvinte
boreala,
in urma ta
mandria-mi,
relicva tardiva
se agata de
ce-ar fi fost daca...??
intrebare epava
in deriva


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« Reply #21 on: Wednesday 17 January 2007, 09:38:04 »
cand ma simt
teribil de neinsemnata
imi subtiez inima
pana ajunge iluzia unui nor
in pericol de a fi spulberat
de prima adiere de vant.


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haiku
« Reply #22 on: Wednesday 17 January 2007, 09:45:57 »
Forma si sens
Gimnastica yoghina
Culoare si vers.
Time is what YOU make of it!


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haiku
« Reply #23 on: Thursday 18 January 2007, 09:27:31 »
Fumul colorat
Iarna se-agata de cos
Vinul aburind.
Time is what YOU make of it!

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haiku
« Reply #24 on: Monday 22 January 2007, 10:17:38 »
Ce ramane din
Fulg cristalin aruncat
Sub cerul senin?
Time is what YOU make of it!


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« Reply #25 on: Thursday 01 February 2007, 17:24:51 »
Usurinta cu care te scrii
Ma scoate din minti.
Esti ingamfat. Si un pic nesimtit.
Cuvintele mele,
Greu plamadite,
zboara pe langa tine
fara sa le privesti in ochi.
Esti dat dracu,
Ma chemi sa-ti vin mai aproape.
Cand ma scald deja
De o eternitate
In venele tale.
In gene..
Pitita demult in subratul tau..
In ridul de la ochi.
Agatata de glezna ta
Groasa, si deloc gingasa;
Ma tarasc dulce
De o vesnicie pe langa tine
Obosita de-atata chef fara bautura…
Ma chemi, desi nu ma strigi,
Nici macar prin soapte.
Ce pot sa zic? Superglue-ul
Sufletului tau m-a manjit
Demult. si nu mai am scapare... :D
pace!

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« Reply #26 on: Thursday 01 February 2007, 17:45:08 »
Ce ramane din
Fulg cristalin aruncat
Sub cerul senin?

asta pare fi cel mai reusit, si cel mai corect de altfel in structura 5-7-5.
e scris sau copiat?
c'est corect

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« Reply #27 on: Monday 05 February 2007, 22:35:15 »
asta pare fi cel mai reusit, si cel mai corect de altfel in structura 5-7-5.
e scris sau copiat?

???
Time is what YOU make of it!


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« Reply #28 on: Monday 05 February 2007, 22:41:01 »
joc de-a cuvinte
cand rusul ma intreaba
de ce sa-i raspund?  ;)
Time is what YOU make of it!